Nowadays in many countries women have full time jobs. Therefore, it is logical to share household tasks evenly between men and women. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Currently women are doing full-time jobs in various countries. Hence, household work should be divided equally between men and women. While I believe that in today's world everything has become more expensive as compare to last couple decades that eventually force women to do job to bear expenses of house, along home work need to be distributed equally between both by mutual understanding.
This essay agrees that owing to inadequacy of money women are giving same efforts in their life comparatively men. First and foremost, to streamline the situation of anything people have to take stern steps in their lives for the betterment whether it is your family or personal life. Moreover, number of women is doing jobs to resolve the primary issues of house for instant, provide education to children, better nutrition, proper life style and others. Furthermore, it is quite difficult to manage all household work along with job as well as proper eye on children which is completely stress full for those who manage it alone whether they are men or women. Many adepts assert that people who spend more than nine hours in workplace they are no longer to do anything more in the same day due to job and tiredness.
It is clear that to make batter and happy life people need to divide their household work evenly that eventually will be worthwhile for their future. Because, extra work and stress stops the people to do something good which effects on their children's life as well, thorough survey depict it was found that those families who do not collaborate with each other that always founded adverse consequences that eventually devastate their social life which also impacts on their children. At last, in order to curb the tendency, at-least government should form the criteria to spread the literacy, quality of education and should build several institutions across the country for encouraging people.
In conclusion, there is no denying that manage household works along job and family is quite difficult, but, it's is essential every task ought to be distributed between men and women in case both of them are doing job, while it has many advantages of doing work together with equal distribution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'stressed'.
Suggestion: stressed
...per eye on children which is completely stress full for those who manage it alone whet...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: ESSENTIAL_ESSENTIALLY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'essentially'?
Suggestion: essentially
... family is quite difficult, but, its is essential every task ought to be distributed betw...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... work together with equal distribution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 3.15609756098 507% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 965.302439024 191% => OK
No of words: 367.0 196.424390244 187% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03542234332 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56628596188 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 106.607317073 194% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564032697548 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 283.868780488 204% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.6894580369 43.030603864 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5833333333 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216131175538 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947954837587 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652668572299 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144417878083 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542289507385 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 40.7170731707 204% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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