Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some it acts like a companion. What is your opinion about this?
Television has been invented in two decades before, from that time people are inhancing the T.V.As now we can find many types of television in the market i.e. CRT,LED,LCD and many more. Now it's became an essensial part of our daily life also.
If we see the uses of TV then we will see that TV is there in each and every domestic family nowadays.There are many benifits from this.We can get news from across the globe on TV with out going here and there we need to just open our TV.In TV now we can see there are many source of entertainment like daily drama,reality shows,news ,music ,movie,travel channel etc.So if a person is free then he can make himself busy by seeing this.
TV is for all age groups also ,it's not like to use by adults or by kid only it's for everyone.Now TV having the option of playing video games.We can connect TV to our laptop .So if see the use there countless uses.
Overall we can say,TV is now became the essential part of our life mainly for those who dont have much friends,don't have much things to do, but as we aree seeing there aree number of use of TV So we should be carefull also some people misuse it by watching TV all the time.They are not intrested in their studies their work.So we should manage our time according to that as no work should get impacted by TV.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239852398524 0.268076937826 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.169741697417 0.116061578633 146% => OK
Adjectives: 0.070110701107 0.0759168565197 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0664206642066 0.0366838410393 181% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0811808118081 0.0131127313244 619% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132841328413 0.155750635184 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0442804428044 0.0379272487307 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.39488515711 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0184501845018 0.0210936926555 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00369003690037 0.00175180941692 211% => OK
Determiners: 0.0738007380074 0.0948980150116 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0369003690037 0.00437022459523 844% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00369003690037 0.00967000014798 38% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1311.0 1161.00487805 113% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.9 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32926829268 5.90752243213 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73763899035 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.252032520325 0.337110787985 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.138211382114 0.247514529752 56% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0975609756098 0.171178102325 57% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0691056910569 0.112407865282 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39488515711 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581300813008 0.546246751206 106% => OK
Word variations: 58.5794303731 49.3433353143 119% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0094962315 178% => OK
Sentence length SD: 158.262879062 42.9750493124 368% => OK
Chars per sentence: 218.5 135.714022679 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.0 23.0094962315 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.689975730869 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 1.48048780488 2161% => OK
Readability: 54.8211382114 47.7609492067 115% => OK
Elegance: 1.31395348837 2.94281807926 45% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20662720878 0.418131533498 49% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.158380017711 0.181151798455 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.149862562984 0.0850326197045 176% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.739709771871 0.706616315825 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.29562503505 0.157042692854 188% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108127638702 0.228904883108 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502279904521 0.108899403657 46% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.297790495428 0.367819155151 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.04969022319 0.0812612215331 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134925611455 0.316326947829 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215606488111 0.0921553760075 23% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.