The bar graph shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005. The subjects are diverse and the different subject groups include Science, Mathematics, Social Sciences, Languages. ect...
Mostly, subjects like Math and Science are more popular among boys with over 15,000 students. As for female students, most of them choose social science subjects with more than 25,000 students because the majority of female students account for a larger number of male students, but language majors may be the weak point of students. many students, so it only accounts for about 5,000 students, both male and female.
Social Science and Mathematics are chosen by many students with about 40,000 students including both boys and girls. However, the number of female students choosing these subjects is still limited with 10,000 for Science and 4 thousand for Math so male students make up the majority. The Arts subject has the lowest number of students choosing to study with only 12,000 students both male and female, there is an unexpected figure that the number of male students choosing Literature is more than twice that of female students. However, the number of law students is equal in terms of male and female students.
In general, depending on the interests of each student, the choice of majors and different universities leads to a change and quite a lot of deviation in the proportion of both male and female students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ect
...athematics, Social Sciences, Languages. ect... Mostly, subjects like Math and Scie...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...jors may be the weak point of students. many students, so it only accounts for about...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, as for, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1244813278 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46972683258 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510373443983 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8377987714 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.272727273 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329836388751 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157227318705 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.199195361377 0.0843802449381 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191554877114 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192223084858 0.0819641961636 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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