The bar chart below the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005.In general, the number of male students choosing subject sciences, mathematics and literature is higher than female students (specifically, the number of male students in the sciences field is over 20,000 and female students are over 10,000; in mathematics, male students account for more than 10,000 people. nearly 20,000 people, female students account for nearly 5,000 people; in literature, male students account for nearly 15,000 people, female students account for more than 15,000 people). The reason may be that male friends prefer logical thinking over female friends. On the other hand, for the remaining subjects such as social sciences, languages, the Arts, there are more female students than male students, specifically, the social sciences industry has the highest female students with 25,000 people choosing to enter this industry, while male students only have the highest number of female students. nearly 15 thousand people; And for Languages, there are nearly 20,000 female students, and less than 5 thousand people for the number of male students. However, the Humanities major has an equal number of male and female students (over 10 thousand people).
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Tranb2102394
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ose certain university subjects in 2005.In general, the number of male students ch...
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Line 1, column 139, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to subject'
Suggestion: to subject
...l, the number of male students choosing subject sciences, mathematics and literature is...
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Line 1, column 399, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nearly
...s account for more than 10,000 people. nearly 20,000 people, female students account ...
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Line 1, column 837, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sciences'' or 'science's'?
Suggestion: sciences'; science's
...male students, specifically, the social sciences industry has the highest female student...
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Line 1, column 1009, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nearly
...the highest number of female students. nearly 15 thousand people; And for Languages,...
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Line 1, column 1035, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le students. nearly 15 thousand people; And for Languages, there are nearly 20,0...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45641025641 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44569688792 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45641025641 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.953380621 43.030603864 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.333333333 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 5.23603664747 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259534708577 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13213667198 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148531828843 0.0843802449381 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259534708577 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.2329268293 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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