In many bustling cities all over the world, overpopulation is a critical issue, which can trigger detrimental implications on society and need to be remedied by urgent methods.
There are several spelling sources why overpopulation in urban cities becomes a huge object around the world. First since increased demands of people who come from impoverished families to get a high salary. In fact, almost nations are in the ages of industrialization and modernization, the fresh company, the multinational corporations that developed formidably in the middle of the cities, which implies these places are a pleasant working environment where attracts people anywhere to desirable salary and the opportunities to improve themself. Second, by advanced infrastructures, people try to move to the big cities to come in for society's services. That means that citizens have to experience lots of modern transportation, access to good quality education, and use interesting entertainment.
It is no difficult than conducting several methods to solve situations of people rushing to urban. To balance the urban and rural population, the governments need to concentrate on investing the budget in the countryside economy. In other words, many policies that need to be carried out to raise the living standard as financial support, create jobs, update material facilities, which citizens wish nothing more than to be equally interested. It is not always thought essential that decreased overpopulation is the government's responsibility. Citizens need to change their perceptions in trying to race to amend the environment. Particularly, if you have the ability, urban or rural is not your shortcomings.
As can be seen, increasing uncontrol population is caused by the number of reasons along with the number of consequences which have to limit in specific remedies to innovate nation's countenance
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: IT_IS_NO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'not' or 'now'?
Suggestion: not; now
...d use interesting entertainment. It is no difficult than conducting several metho...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...al that decreased overpopulation is the governments responsibility. Citizens need to change...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 965.302439024 166% => OK
No of words: 289.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53979238754 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33805136184 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 106.607317073 170% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626297577855 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 283.868780488 181% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8615706469 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.153846154 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136985183545 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442291728982 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457980810239 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846317124072 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313089048164 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 40.7170731707 241% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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