People attending collages or university's for many different reasons , why do you think people attend college or university's ?
Universities like this littel world , bibble of time separatr from every thing before attending college or universities for many different reasons. i think majority of people attracting towords university because career preparation , increasing their abilitys and knowledge.
Now a days , universitys and colleges are the best platforms to develop skills, through attending lybrirys, group discustion and seminars by that way student and people can develop their comunication skills. while in this way people are attracting to words universities and collages.
By thee way ,there is an another strong reason, that to build up their career with the support of university's and colleges led us to get good opportunity in feature.
Attanding to the big plotforms pf education leads us to develope our self
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ds university because career preparation , increasing their abilitys and knowledge...
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...heir abilitys and knowledge. Now a days , universitys and colleges are the best p...
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... education leads us to develope our self
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 679.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 123.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52032520325 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97652908127 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.731707317073 0.547539520022 134% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0543673585 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.166666667 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317282579946 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143340814968 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836317078956 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159471325839 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123867906941 0.0819641961636 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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