People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are go out what are the cause and solutions?
In the modern age, why people have never feel safe in the house's either they go house. Obviously there are couple of shortcomings. Presenting my view I would intend to explore the aforementioned view in following paragraphs.
One should provide a variety of reasons to justify the opinion that there are probably a number of factors involved why people not feel safe. The chief cause might be that people are scared about our natural calamities in which time they come. For instance, in the Japan earthquake and tsunami are come in the every year and most of the people died in every year. As well as subsequent factor could be that in the out of hoses environment are fully surrounded by the air pollution. As a consequence, people's skin is fully damaged by the pollution and it is being difficult to take brrathed in polluted air. Another stumbling block might be that day to day pollution is being developed by the nomination of cars and people are more likely to travel by own vehicle's to travel the local.
However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of some machines are make by the science which gives the knowledge about in what time natural calamities are come and people go far the concrete building. The successful way to confront this would be to strict rules should be make the government against the pollution and local people must be gone by the private vehicles. It is obviously favourable to grow the plants in the suburbs of cities and in the sides of the rodes.
To conclusion, although there are good reason to takckle the problem. But in opinion I said that people ouhgt to used the solar car and bykes it is also environment friendly and never produced any kind of noise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'felt'.
Suggestion: felt
...n the modern age, why people have never feel safe in the houses either they go house...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
... travel the local. However, a definite actions could be take to mitigate of some machi...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'made'?
Suggestion: made
...this would be to strict rules should be make the government against the pollution an...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for instance, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.0 329% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 301.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67109634551 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55983030806 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 106.607317073 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541528239203 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 283.868780488 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4630091121 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.428571429 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17194628785 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056039283508 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718683403924 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990963748709 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055738218152 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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