Dear Sir,
The purpose of this letter is to apprise you about the problems in broadband services in North Nazimabad Town. However, my name is Aamir. I am one of the users of your internet services. Furthermore, I am a student of engineering. I use the internet for making assignments and study purposes. Therefore, I would like to describe the problems incurring while using the internet.
Firstly, the connectivity problem. More often internet disconnects cause breaks in downloads, uploads or browsing. Seldom, it becomes difficult to finish the assignment, research or tasks on time. Secondly, Besides the connectivity problem, internet speed progresses slowly comparatively to the subscribed package of 2 MBPS. Finally, the video hangs while watching online video lectures. Therefore, I request you to take these issues into your consideration and make possible solutions to these problems.
All these problems incurred after reinstallation of cables in our town. Some of my fellow using the same service as I do accusation the same issues and notice repercussion of these problems after the upgrade.
I hope you take this matter as urgent and resolve issues at your earliest.
Yours Faithfully,
Amir
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Seldom' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...eaks in downloads, uploads or browsing. Seldom, it becomes difficult to finish the ass...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42105263158 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0184107282 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647368421053 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6984779926 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.375 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.875 22.9334400587 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17436613847 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547281169051 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041642011554 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922468960644 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389223695624 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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