The percentage of people who were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting this main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares and contrasts the proportion of people living in cities, towns and countrysides over the period of 15 years, from 1995 to 2010, in terms of those born in australia and those born in elsewhere.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the share of people living in cities has highest figures over the given period. it is also clear that the percentage of people living in rural areas witnessing a decline.
In 1995, about 50% people born in australia who chose to live in cities, compared to 60% people born outside australia living there. While, the figure for people born in australia and outside australia living in towns were the lowest, with their figures standing at almost 20% and 10% respectively. The percentage of people who were born outside australia living in countries was 40%, which was 10% higher than that of those born in australia.
By 2010, the share of people living in cities still dominated the bar chart, with its figure for people born in australia and people born outside australia standing at more than 60% and 80% in the given order. The quantity of people born in australia living in towns was nearly 20%, which is identical to that of people living in rural areas. However, the figure for people born outside australia living in rural areas was lower than that of people living in towns, at around 8% and 10% in turn.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... highest figures over the given period. it is also clear that the percentage of pe...
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...in rural areas witnessing a decline. In 1995, about 50% people born in austra...
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...han that of those born in australia. By 2010, the share of people living in c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77868852459 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35579816708 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.409836065574 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.8623236946 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.555555556 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417931640274 0.215688989381 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229761979377 0.103423049105 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968235163647 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267207784746 0.15604864568 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128939038167 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.