The picture below shows the Use of renewable energy accounting for the total energy from 1971 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main feature and make comparison where relevant.
The given line graph illustrations the information about utilisation of renewable energy sources of Total amount of energy between 1971 and 2006 in Finland, Denmark, Germany, France, United Kingdom and United States.
Overall, it is clear that maximum amount of renewable energy was consumed by Finland; however, the United Kingdom was the lowest energy user over given period. It is apparent that use of energy in every country depicted a upward tendency.
To begin with, energy used by Finland was peaked in initial year which was about 25% of total energy; whereas, in following years it experienced fluctuations and reached at similar point (25%)till 2006. The renewable energy consumption in Denmark witnessed a small drip in 1936 ,then followed by moderate incline
It is interesting to note that in unites states the usage of every was only about 8% during 1971. In contrast, after fluctuations till 1991, it inclined significantly and reached at more than 15%.
Probing further, similar trend was followed by Germany and France in using renewable energy and reached at nearby a tenth till last year. Surprising, negligible use of energy was made by United Kingdom in first year than it increased slowly until 2006.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, then, whereas, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25252525253 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61961571441 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585858585859 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5369604844 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214377601468 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107488934413 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526176759375 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132815344391 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611797881975 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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