The picture describe the development of an Island. Make a report.
The picture depicts about the development of an Island. From the given figure, it can be concluded that the Island has a lot of changes and modifications. It is modified into a tourism place.
Firstly, the Island was an ordinary land which is surrounded by sea and a beach in the west area. This island consisted of coconut tree and other plants and it was pure without artificial buildings and human activity. It can be summarized that this island and its function had not been maximized before.
After several years, there are some alterations within this land. As the figure shows it begins to be utilized as marine tourism. In the beach side, it has built a swimming pool. Around the coconut tree, some inns has been constructed so all the visitors can enjoy the view, a windy and hot environment inside the inn. In the south east area there is a pier for people who enjoy sailing. There are 2 sailboats which is always ready to be used anytime.
Furthermore, as other tourism places, it offers footpath for the walker and vehicle track with each directions. The vehicle can be used in reception which is located close by the accommodations in the west and east area and in the restaurant in the northern side of receptionist. A visitor is only allowed to walk around between inns and beach, so cars or motorcycles are restricted within this location.
To sum up, this island has improved and it has a good outlook as a tourism places. But, in East are of this island needs more explore as in other sides.
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- The picture describe the development of an Island Make a report 85
some inns has been constructed
some inns have been constructed
There are 2 sailboats which is always ready
There are 2 sailboats which are always ready
Sentence: Furthermore, as other tourism places, it offers footpath for the walker and vehicle track with each directions.
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But, in East are of this island needs more explore as in other sides.
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