the picture illustrate the the working principals of a hot balloon
The picture demonstrates the structure of a typical hot air balloon. Overall, it is clear that the air balloon includes three main parts which are the envelope, the engine and the passenger seating.
The most important part of an air balloon is the extremely large envelope. The envelope is manufactured by putting the gores together then tightening these gores to make the parachute valve at the upper side. Additionally, in the envelope structure, there is a single gore replaced by a strike of panels. At the down side, people use skirt to tight all the gores. The next part is the air balloon’s engine which is connected with above envelope and below passenger seating by lots of rope. The engine is the co-operation of two burners and two propane cylinder. These equipment mixing the propane with the air, after which heating that mixture to release flame to make the hot air. Subsequently, this hot air goes straight to the envelope and fills up the envelope. Due to the lighter weight of the hot air, the air balloon can take off and fly with the cool air pushing the hot air inside the envelope. The last but not least part is the passenger basket which contains propane cylinder aside and have a small space for passenger on the inside.
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- the picture illustrate the the working principals of a hot balloon 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: DOWN_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'downside'?
Suggestion: downside
... replaced by a strike of panels. At the down side, people use skirt to tight all the gore...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'cylinder' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'cylinders'.
Suggestion: cylinders
...peration of two burners and two propane cylinder. These equipment mixing the propane wit...
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Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this equipment' or 'These equipments'?
Suggestion: This equipment; These equipments
...f two burners and two propane cylinder. These equipment mixing the propane with the air, after ...
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Line 3, column 923, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...t air inside the envelope. The last but not least part is the passenger basket which cont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77064220183 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57597296782 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550458715596 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9160863453 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137341537635 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616442548033 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826009874594 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152128790438 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555608696653 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.