The picture illustrates the process of maturity from eggs of the honey bee.
The picture illustrates the process of maturity from eggs of the honey bee.
Overall, the life circle of this species has four steps and lasts between 34 and 36 days. Besides, the process begins with the eggs are born by females, and will finish by the maturity to become the new adult bee.
In the first stage, one or two eggs are laid by mature females every three days. Next, after 9-10 days, these eggs hatch and become immature insects or nymphs which have the shape similar to the mature bee but smaller.
During the third stage, these nymphs grow in size and shred their outside shell three times. The molting takes place 5 days after the eggs hatch, then 7 days, and again another 9 days later to become the young adult bees. After the young bees have emerged from the nymphs, it takes them 4 days to mature. Becoming the adult honey bee also ends the life circle of this species.
- The pie charts compare the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets,namely an average diet, a healthy diet, and a healthy diet for sport. 56
- The charts below show percentage of water used by different sectors in Sydney, in 1997 and 2007.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant. 56
- The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. 56
- the picture below shows how a hot balloon works. 78
- The table illustrates how much money donated to support technology, by the US, EU, and other countries charities, in billions of US dollars between 2006 and 2010. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47239263804 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.80332620358 2.65546596893 68% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601226993865 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5660354046 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394799755205 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19958176724 0.103423049105 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.291888167741 0.0843802449381 346% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.368758731151 0.15604864568 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.364961282735 0.0819641961636 445% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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