The maps reveal information about the amendents take place at Languna Beach in year 1950, 1970 and 1990.
Overall, the whole Laguna Beach was transformed into a modern beach in period of 4 decades.
It is vivid from map that in 1950 the small beach huts were available for visitors to stay whereas, in 1970 they were demolished and a villas were constructed there and by 1990, a luxury hotel named hotel laguna was built along with a pool to accommodate the visitors at Laguna beach. Moreover, in 1950 a way to laguna beach was a rough track which was converted to a road in 1970.
Furthermore, woodland was cleared to set up caravan park in 1970 and by 1990, visitors were facilitated with a big car park there. Besides this, two more changes take place in laguna beach. Firstly, the introduction of surf school in south of the beach and Secondly, the making of landscaped gardens in west of the hotel in 1990.
- People are wearing western style clothes rather than the traditional type of clothes Why is the case Is it a positive or negative development 56
- Some people say that technologies like mobile phones are destroying social interactions To want extent do you agree or disagree 78
- People are becoming too dependent on the Internet and phone Is it a positive or negative development 81
- The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life 76
- WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Computers are now the basis of the modern world They should therefore be introduced into classrooms and their programs used for direct teaching purposes However dependence on computers in teach 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a modern beach in period of 4 decades. It is vivid from map that in 1950 the sm...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a villa' or simply 'villas'?
Suggestion: a villa; villas
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57926829268 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48495622417 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579268292683 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9546667617 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316552293529 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153696236712 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073036904104 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196560608868 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390344593178 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.