This pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The picture illustrates that how tomato ketchup is made and processed. Overall, the process of making tomato ketchup were operated by plenty actors, started from farmer, company, as well as supermarket.
To begin with, farmer should pick up tomatoes that had cropped and put it in a basket. Second, farmer should sort and divided tomatoes into two groups, nice and worse tomatoes. Third, farmer should send their tomatoes which it already shorted to the factory. Fourth, the factory employee should cut and remove stalk, seeds, and skin tomatoes. after this season, tomatoes should be put in the container drum for crushing it. In the crush session, the employee would adding sugar, vinegar and salt into the tomato’s container. Furthermore, boiling the tomato’s container. after cooked, tomato ketchup is ready. However, we should leave the ketchup for two hours before packing to bottle.
after bottling session, the ketchup should be labelled by brand marks. Moreover, the ketchup should be standardize by quality control. In the last processing, the ketchup should be packing by box and distributing to numerous supermarkets in many regions. Finally, the tomato sauce could bought in the store and tasted with hamburger and fries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...remove stalk, seeds, and skin tomatoes. after this season, tomatoes should be put in ...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'add'
Suggestion: add
...n the crush session, the employee would adding sugar, vinegar and salt into the tomato...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...e, boiling the tomato's container. after cooked, tomato ketchup is ready. Howeve...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... two hours before packing to bottle. after bottling session, the ketchup should be...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'standardized'?
Suggestion: standardized
... marks. Moreover, the ketchup should be standardize by quality control. In the last proces...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'buy'
Suggestion: buy
...egions. Finally, the tomato sauce could bought in the store and tasted with hamburger...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mato sauce could bought in the store and tasted with hamburger and fries.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, moreover, second, so, third, well, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38265306122 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59128931227 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612244897959 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2793661617 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0666666667 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175500300008 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741440865713 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079364798723 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14043436191 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649125674939 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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