The pictures below show the process of making clothes from recycled plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The stages of recycling used plastic bottles into clothes are depicted in the process diagram. Overall, the method contains totally 12 steps, from cutting to cleaning and altering, starts with selecting bottles from households and finishes when clothing is ultimately produced.
The recycling process begins when plastic bottles are collected from housing and transported by recyclable garbage carrying trucks to factories where they are prioritized into identical sizes and qualities. Prior to being cleaned, the plastic bottles are transferred through the process of being cut into small pieces. Subsequently, the materials produced by previous steps are left to dry out under the sunshine for approximately 10 hours.
Moving on to analyse the remaining stages of the process, having been boiled in high pressure, the plastic pieces are strained into rollings of yarn. Penultimately, the yarn is weaved into separate units of fabric which are manufactured into clothes in the final stage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...ngs of yarn. Penultimately, the yarn is weaved into separate units of fabric which are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58940397351 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75413894844 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649006622517 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7196965815 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210829322917 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995956567682 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723195426873 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144464000065 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676079796296 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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