The diagram illustrates the methods of recycling the wasted glass bottles.
Initially, all the wasted bottles of the city are collected in a place known as the collection point for recycling which are then transported through trucks.During the second stage,the glass bottles are kept under high pressures .Moreover, the clean,green and brown bottles are shifted towards the glass factories where these are broken into smaller pieces of glass; However, the bottles were transfered to the burning furnace to be moulded into form of bottles.
Moving ahead, the products such as soft drinks were added into these reused bottles and packed.Furthermore , these bottles are made ready to be sold in large shops and supermarkets.
All in all, myraid steps are performed for the formation of glass bottles that are to be reused and to be sold again in the supermarkets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ed into these reused bottles and packed.Furthermore , these bottles are made ready to be so...
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...se reused bottles and packed.Furthermore , these bottles are made ready to be sold...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25179856115 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87313382201 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.425907442 43.030603864 345% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.5 112.824112599 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.75 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.25 5.23603664747 291% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111761062579 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903957958042 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08753303475 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903957958042 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08753303475 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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