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The given pie charts compare the proportion of visitors from different nations to Australia and Germany from 1960 to 2010.
Overall, it is clearly seen that while most of the travelers to Germany were Europeans, there were significant changes in the rate of tourists to Australia.
A closer look at the statistics reveals that in 1960, irrespective of locations, the proportion for European holiday-makers was the highest, far exceeding the following figure. It is striking that the proportion of Europeans visitors to Australia was higher than its counterpart by a small margin with the disparity of 8 percent. Both countries shared considerable similarities with the rate of travelers from Asia being precisely 10 percent each, making it the lowest position.
However, in subsequent 50 years, while there was a dramatical decline in the rate of Europeans visiting Australia from 53 to 10 percent, this nation witnesses a rocket in the number of Asian visitors to 63 percent, occupying the highest level. However, in Germany, despite a small reduction by 5 percent, European holiday-makers still remained top-charted. It is also noticed that whereas American and Asian tourists to this country followed upward trends, there was a drop by 14 percent in the proportion of British visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, still, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30243902439 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01435786878 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575609756098 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4123976778 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.875 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0604568138488 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.032462249155 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085887038262 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06492449831 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112452529729 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.