The given pie-chart illustrates the information about the main reasons of cultivable land degradable and the given table mentions the affected area by these factor in 1990.
According to the pie-chart , overgrazing causes the highest percentages of land infertile while other activities causes the least.Similarly , deforestation done by living beings also played a main role by which one-third part get degraded.Likewise overgrazing causes 28 percent land infertile.
As far as the table mentions the main data of Europe which is the highest degradable part of world about 23 percent in which deforestation(9.8%) is seen as a major problem.Whereas North America faces the least land degraded of 5 percent.In contract,
Oceania get land less productive by 13 percent in which overgrazing is a main cause.
In conclusion , Overgrazing is seen as a highest factor to degrade the land and other activities in the pie-chart shows the least . Whereas in the table Europe faces the most and North America get least land degraded.
- The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparis 73
- The line graph below gives information about the rates of unemployment between 1991 and 2005 in three different countries in Europe The table shows the percentage of men and women in the workforce in these three countries 34
- The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. the table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and ma 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Similarly
...while other activities causes the least.Similarly , deforestation done by living beings a...
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...er activities causes the least.Similarly , deforestation done by living beings als...
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Suggestion: Likewise
...le by which one-third part get degraded.Likewise overgrazing causes 28 percent land infe...
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Suggestion: Likewise,
...le by which one-third part get degraded.Likewise overgrazing causes 28 percent land infe...
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Suggestion: Whereas
...estation9.8% is seen as a major problem.Whereas North America faces the least land degr...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: In
...es the least land degraded of 5 percent.In contract, Oceania get land less prod...
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Suggestion: ,
...razing is a main cause. In conclusion , Overgrazing is seen as a highest factor...
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...ivities in the pie-chart shows the least . Whereas in the table Europe faces the m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, likewise, similarly, so, third, whereas, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3850931677 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26714450882 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503105590062 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.4911514225 43.030603864 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.4 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 5.23603664747 256% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228765754296 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135545562809 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577485079906 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139758892414 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514065918905 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.2329268293 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.5 11.4329268293 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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