the pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants.
The pie chart shows the percentage of energy consumption in Australia for different household purposes. However, the table depicts the range of electricity used on the basis of the number of people in the house in kilowatt-hours per year.
overall, it is clear that, for heating and cooling, and water heating consumes the highest amount of energy when compared to all other household purposes and the range of electricity increases with an increase in the number of people in the house.
To begin with the pie chart, water heating consumes almost one-fourth of the total energy where heating and cooling consumes 38% of total energy. Moreover, the energy consumption for lighting, fridges, and freezers are almost equal to 7% where stand by power and cooking are only 3% and 4% respectively and only 6% of energy consumption for other appliances.
In addition to that, if there is only one number in the house, the electricity would range between 5,000 to 6,000 kWh per year but the range differs if the occupants double. Similarly, if the number of people in the house reaches 6 or more the electricity will be 12,000 to 16,000 kWh per year.
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- proportion of population aged 65 and over in Japan, Sweden and USA 67
- the pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants. 73
- News editors decide what to dobroadcast on television and what to print in newspaper.What factors do you think influence these decision ? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, similarly, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90256410256 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66283748745 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517948717949 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0535415671 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.571428571 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23484056887 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111538073333 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667352118919 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148864140427 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101560556446 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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