The Pie chart gives information about the country of birth of people living in Australia and the table shows where people born in these countries live.
The pie chart demonstrates the proportion of native land of human in Australia, while the table data illustrates the distribution of these people in cities and rural areas.
Overall, it is clear to seen that the highest percentages off father land was Australia. Besides, most of people in Australia live in urban areas.
As can be seen from the pie chart, Australia occupied the great percentage off 73%, which is about over 10 times higher than that of UK. People from China, Netherland and New Zealand nearly make up tinily number of population with 3%, 1% and 2% respectively. Besides, it is so surprising that nearly 15% off Australia’s population come from other countries.
As fore the details from the table, it is so surprising that Chinese live in cities, constitute nearly 100%, while the figure for Australian appropriate only 83%. Besides, Netherlands and UK has the approximate percentage of people living in town with 90% and 89%.And the least number of citizens is New Zealand with 80%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...off father land was Australia. Besides, most of people in Australia live in urban areas. As c...
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Line 4, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
... people living in town with 90% and 89%.And the least number of citizens is New Zea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0119047619 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8028320226 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613095238095 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7781352107 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226930696965 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103315181801 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752331423154 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147940362863 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042981386346 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.