Given is the pie chart illustrating the electricity generating process in 2 European countries include Germany and France in all sources in 2009.
Overall, best impression from the graph is that out of all types of electricity producers, thermal energy is the most important source of electricity in Germany. But the nuclear energy is the number one energy source in France. Out of all electricity resources, renewable energy sources are in one outlay. Biomas energy(39.3%) produces more electricity in Germany compares to France. But hydroelectric energy(80.5) produces more joules in france. Moreover, outcome is more in Germany than France due to extra 50 billion kwh energy production.
Looking at detail, it can be seen that solar energy is the least energy sources in both country in man made resources. When, biomas energy took greater part in Germany, hydroelectric sources produced more electricity in France. Comparatively, wind is the 2nd most powerful electricity generaters in Germany. But around 10 percentage is only seen in france.
From this, renewable energy resources are the most powerful sources of energy. Because in Germany(17.4%) make more electricity compares to France(13.7%). This cause the electricity production plummet to lower level in France.
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Essay evaluation report
illustrating the electricity generating process in 2 European countries include Germany and France in all sources in 2009.
illustrating the electricity generating process in 2 European countries which include Germany and France in all sources in 2009.
illustrating the electricity generating process in 2 European countries including Germany and France in all sources in 2009.
Overall, best impression from the graph is that
Overall, the best impression from the graph is that
Biomas energy(39.3%) produces more electricity in Germany compares to France.
Biomas energy(39.3%) produces more electricity in Germany compared to France.
Because in Germany(17.4%) make more electricity compares to France(13.7%)
Because in Germany(17.4%), it makes more electricity compared to France(13.7%)
Because Germany(17.4%) makes more electricity compared to France(13.7%)
This cause the electricity production
This causes the electricity production
Sentence: Comparatively, wind is the 2nd most powerful electricity generaters in Germany.
Error: generaters Suggestion: generates
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 200 200
No. of Characters: 1038 1000
No. of Different Words: 106 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.761 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.19 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.875 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 90 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 40 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.284 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.431 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...rance in all sources in 2009. Overall, best impression from the graph is that out o...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re the most powerful sources of energy. Because in Germany17.4% make more electricity c...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'look', 'moreover', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.333333333333 0.268076937826 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.126126126126 0.116061578633 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103603603604 0.0759168565197 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0315315315315 0.0366838410393 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0045045045045 0.0131127313244 34% => OK
Prepositions: 0.144144144144 0.155750635184 93% => OK
Participles: 0.027027027027 0.0379272487307 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.0122960562 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.018018018018 0.0210936926555 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0720720720721 0.0948980150116 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0045045045045 0.00437022459523 103% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0045045045045 0.00967000014798 47% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1274.0 1161.00487805 110% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.9 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.5 5.90752243213 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.459183673469 0.337110787985 136% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.367346938776 0.247514529752 148% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224489795918 0.171178102325 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.163265306122 0.112407865282 145% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0122960562 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.546246751206 98% => OK
Word variations: 47.223892712 49.3433353143 96% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 8.93414634146 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0094962315 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4701834914 42.9750493124 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 135.714022679 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 23.0094962315 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 0.689975730869 41% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 50.7346938776 47.7609492067 106% => OK
Elegance: 3.11111111111 2.94281807926 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346925814828 0.418131533498 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127329555505 0.181151798455 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0893801645087 0.0850326197045 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564928738841 0.706616315825 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144854022345 0.157042692854 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150025393511 0.228904883108 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103255046482 0.108899403657 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.414950201731 0.367819155151 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0800238030949 0.0812612215331 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279434903965 0.316326947829 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111911503546 0.0921553760075 121% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70731707317 216% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 3.16585365854 253% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 7.1512195122 182% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.