The pie charts illustrate the percentage of fresh and salt water and the information about freshwater. The bar graph demonstrates the proportion of different using water purposes in three countries.
In general, it is obvious from the pie charts that the majority of water is freshwater. In addition, ice water is the main source of freshwater while the opposite is true for surface water. The biggest difference is in the percentage of agricultural and industrial water using in Saudi Arabia.
As can be seen from pie charts, 97% of all water is freshwater is significantly exceeded salty water, at 3%. Regarding freshwater,the percentage of ice water is highest, at 70%. Standing at 20%, the proportion of groundwater is twice as much as easily accessible surface water, with 10%.
Look at the bar graph in more detail, regarding Egypt, the figure for water is utilized for agriculture take the least, at over 60%, followed by domestic and industrial purposes, with 25% and 10% respectively. Nearly 80% of water in Saudi Arabia is used for agriculture while the percentage of domestic and industrial water stands at 15% and 9% in that order. Meanwhile, the proportion of water is consumed for the industry in Canada, with 65%, is higher than households and agriculture, with 25% and 10%
- Some people think that criminals should be given longer terms in prison, so as to reduce the crime rate.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Government should change the way individuals live while others believe they should choose the way themselves. Discuss these both points of view and give your opinion. 73
- The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries China and India 59
- The bar chart shows information about reasons why men and women make a trip 67
- Advertisements bring many negative effects on people and the society. What are these effects? How to solve this problem? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...salty water, at 3%. Regarding freshwater,the percentage of ice water is highest, at ...
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Line 7, column 493, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er than households and agriculture, with 25% and 10%
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07476635514 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97966731851 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504672897196 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7646074865 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7272727273 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328915039958 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147829999551 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718346997731 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228623171396 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067499950078 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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