The pie chart shows women in poverty in the USA and bar chart compares poverty rate by age and gender.
The pie chart illustrates about the poverty proportion by women in there different situations. The bar graph show the same thing according to gender and their age in the United States.
Overall, it is clear from the graph that single women with no dependent children have face maximum problems related poverty because it is higher on rate. While men face this problem lower than women.
By analysing data, more than half of proportion covered by the single women with no children 54%. Another three categories cover in other half part. Single women with children poverty rate is almost a quarter and married with children responsibility have a half percentage of these. The lower rate of poverty show in married women with no children only 8%.
By analysing further data, poverty rate divided in two categories age and gender. Men and women in their under five years age group achieved almost same proportion 20% it is highest percentage than other. After that both age group alleviated to 5% but in 18-24 age groups women poverty ratio go up rapidly to their highest position once again but men at same stage. During the period till their old age these proportion fluctuates and women at their highest positions than men. At the end 75 and up age group men at 5% and women at 15 % respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...e women with no dependent children have face maximum problems related poverty becaus...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d poverty because it is higher on rate. While men face this problem lower than women....
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Line 6, column 171, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the highest'.
Suggestion: is the highest
... achieved almost same proportion 20% it is highest percentage than other. After that both ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83856502242 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43797009465 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52466367713 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.68232843 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318266613817 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126602282758 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937113455999 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211019189294 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109345929329 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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