The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.
The pie charts describe a record of the expenditure in food, housing, and transport and utilization of the resources by the global nations along with population distribution.
Overall, the maximum resources are consumed, where the Asian population is greater in number. People are spending their economy in other areas than food, housing, transport, and clothing.
From the first chart, People are spending 40% of their money on other expenses rather than the basic need, it's the maximum expenditure. The food becomes the second one with 24 percentage, also the transport, housing, and clothing are reducing its ratio by 6% in chronological order. The clothing is the least popular need for people.
Secondly, Asia has more than half of the global population and it is 57% of the total cover. Europe and USA have nearly a quartile of Asia and Africa and another nation comes with 10% and 5% respectively. 60% of products are consumed in the USA and Europe and the rest of them are in other countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: greater
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...food, housing, transport, and clothing. From the first chart, People are spendin...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0119047619 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70515905032 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5525186232 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5555555556 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121028280073 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477385235275 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538463802515 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835602538499 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545166291162 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.