the pie charts below present information about what the UK graduates did after leaving university in 2018
The pie charts illustrates the different decisions between students who graduated with a bachelor's degree and those left school with PHD certificate in British in 2018
Overall,two pie charts shows that bachelor's students outnumbered PHD ones in full-time employment and combination of study and work, an opposite pattern was observed in further study and work abroad. Students leaving university with bachelor's degree experienced unemployment, however, no one with PHD certificate was the unemployed.
In 2008, bachelor's British students becoming full-time employment accounted for 45%, the percentage of full time workers reached almost tripple in comparison to PHD ones. One in ten students with bachelor's certificate prefered the combining study with work, while the proportions of counterparts with PHD degree comprised 5%
By contrast, after leaving school, a higher proportions of students with PHD degree opted studying in advance more than those gained a bachelor's diploma, with 56% and 25% respectively. In addition, a quater of working abroad came from PHD students, being higher than bachelor's counterparts. One in ten bachelor's students went through unemployment, on the other hand, all postgraduates had their career
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71038251366 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0413064013 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.335031334 43.030603864 247% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 174.166666667 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0735684662121 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365280609924 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440703209155 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611881212286 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489298529578 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 13.2329268293 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.43 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.