The pie chart demonstrate online sales of books, clothes, travel and films/music in New Zealand between 2003 and 2013.
Overall, the sales of book and film/music went higher over the decade , while online sales of travel clothes dipped.
Travel industries made 36% of total online sales in New Zealand in 2003 which was highest. Their digital sales declined significantly after a decade and reached 29%. Similarly the percentage of online sales by the clothes was exactly 24% in 2003 and this figure dropped by almost 8%.
Finally online sales of film/music rose sharply from 21% in 2003 to 33% and became the largest online selling industry in 2013. Even the online book sale was the least in 2003 only 19%, this percentage improved marginally to 22% over the decade.If we compare those two charts, it is easy to say that there was a considerable rise in online film/music sales (by 11%) during the period. Similarly, online book sales rose by 3% from the initial ratio of 19%. On the contrary, sales share of travel and clothes dropped by 11% and 6% respectively. Most important difference between the online sales in the given years was the film/music industry's sales. They accounted for one-third of online retail sales in 2013 while a number of 2003's film/music sales was less than one-fourth of total online sales.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, similarly, third, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92376681614 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50579685073 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529147982063 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.585614985 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8181818182 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2306654751 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112665935352 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680333821779 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175564768731 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690682065874 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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