The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The circular charts reveals that information of representation the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013. It gives two pie charts and it is give four items.
Moving a quick glance on the illustration, in 2003, travel was rose proportion in the chart in 36. Afterthat, person was interested in film and music in 2003. It was seconded increased percent in 21. Moreover, clothes and books was equal protortion in 19 and 24 .
On the flip side, in 2013 dwellers was more interested in the film and music. It was highest portortion in film and music the 33 in the chart. Otherwise, travel and books was similar percent in 2013. Then, clothes was very down fall proportion 16.
To conclusion, in 2003 people was interested in the travel.Then, in 2013 person was liked the film theater and music and it is climb proportion in the chart.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, second, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74342105263 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69046156836 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8492573683 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5454545455 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8181818182 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173585355283 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773334936808 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128405947116 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142181895041 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147772852476 0.0819641961636 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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