The line graph shows the percentage of people living below poverty line (According to world stamdards)in developing ciuntries for the year 1990 to 2050
The linear graph reveals that information of representation the proportion of dweller living below poverty line.It is give four nations like China,India,Mexico and Brazil.
Moving a quick glance on the illustration china was very declined proportion in 1900. Hence,in 2000 was rose percent in the china and may be there will reduce in the 2050.Afterthat,in 1990 and 1950 was similar proportion in the india.But also, in 2000 was boomed percent in india 65. Furthermore, there could be plummet proportion in 2050 and there will be fall down day by day.
Nevertheless, in 1950 was upsurge day by day and in 2000 was more incresed in 80 percent.
Moreover,there will not be doubt upsurge in 2050. Otherwise,in 1900 was higher nation in the chart for the brazil.Last,there was equal ratio in all the years.
To sum up,brazil was same proportion in all the years.As well as,mexico country was increasing day by day and definitaly upsurge will be future.But also, india and china was similar ratio in all the years and there will plumed percent in 2050.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04571428571 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13122001391 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3697392571 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.375 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 5.23603664747 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850764015549 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441736430585 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539778526356 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596892412001 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626613963782 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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