Some people cliam that not enough of the water from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.
According to me, environment play a vital role in human being life. Today,there are umpteen things use in the life like pastic bags, rubbish and polythene.There are plethora reasons behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
In the sophisticated era, nowadays, all age group use the transportion system in daily rountine.Hence,there are two categories of transportion system like public and private.Aferthat,all adolescent use the vehicle in their life.But also,vehicle are cause pollution surrounding the areas. Therefore,they are very detrimental in dwellers life.For instance, hypertension, anxiety, Obesity,cardiac and depression so on.
Nevertheless, some people believe that it is good law government make waste use the recycled material. Then, They are very good effect all the general because it they use a waste material like plastic bags,polythne and rubbish and products raw material etc. Last but not the least, teacher learn to the pupil waste material recycled use are easily use it in their life. In my opinion, parents is like a god. All as well,all teenager go their footprints in their parents.otherwise, parents should be ask to the children waste from homes is recycled and toddlers are use material it is very beneficial in their future.
In summarise,after analysing that issue reckon, I think that, dweller use the recycled material in their homes and schools.In my opinion, pupil could be learn recycling material use it their life and it is reduce the pollution day by day. Then,they are save the money.they use the recycling material. I
believe that government allow this law are benefits to human life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37931034483 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36269710651 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.138523792 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178742151262 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726778365961 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837510764174 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902704805619 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770853187074 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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