In this sophistication era , today are interest used the businessman, engineer and toddlers . In fact interest is very comman in the home and some people used the wi fi . I disagree this statement . I will dicuss in my essay.
Gone on the days , nowadays youngerster are alot of time spend in the Internet website . They are always time available in telecommunications. For instances , whatsapp ,Snapchat, twit or and Facebook and so on . They are play more games in the Internet. They could not performance outdoor activity because it is interest on electronic gadgets. Otherwise , they do not involve any activities like talk , study , participate functions dance , sing ,outdoor activities so on .they always time to introvert in himself.
Nevertheless, some people believe that public library is not a waste of money because it many reasons. In modernisation era , juveniles do not focus on study .they are time killing in their life . Moreover, I thing teenager spent time in public library there is increase knowledge day by day . Last but not the least , they make new friends and pupils can be active all the module .
In conclusion, after analysing that issue reckon , children age is very golden period in their
Life . In my opinion , children mind is very sharp and it easily catch all new thing . This age pupils learnt good thing and bad thing but Internet help for elder person .
- Medical technology is responsible for the human’slife expectancy. To what extent do you agree ordisagree? 77
- The table show the proportions of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009. 67
- The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Scientist have been warning for many years that in order to protect the environment people should use less energy.However,most people do not change that ways of thing .what is causing the behaviour?how can people be encourged to change. 39
- Do you think card less society is realistic and why? what are the advantages and disadvantages 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01304347826 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86113863008 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613043478261 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6884210688 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8235294118 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5294117647 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0827186175608 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266661436821 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453806166012 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440699220734 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539013357757 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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