In this sophistication era , today are interest used the businessman, engineer and toddlers . In fact interest is very comman in the home and some people used the wi fi . I disagree this statement . I will dicuss in my essay.
Gone on the days , nowadays youngerster are alot of time spend in the Internet website . They are always time available in telecommunications. For instances , whatsapp ,Snapchat, twit or and Facebook and so on . They are play more games in the Internet. They could not performance outdoor activity because it is interest on electronic gadgets. Otherwise , they do not involve any activities like talk , study , participate functions dance , sing ,outdoor activities so on .they always time to introvert in himself.
Nevertheless, some people believe that public library is not a waste of money because it many reasons. In modernisation era , juveniles do not focus on study .they are time killing in their life . Moreover, I thing teenager spent time in public library there is increase knowledge day by day . Last but not the least , they make new friends and pupils can be active all the module .
In conclusion, after analysing that issue reckon , children age is very golden period in their
Life . In my opinion , children mind is very sharp and it easily catch all new thing . This age pupils learnt good thing and bad thing but Internet help for elder person .
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- In some countries it is illegal employers to reject job appications on the basis of age criteria .it a positive or negative development. 61
- As technology is developing more and more people are getting hooked on to internet to purchase goods. Do the benefits of online shopping outweigh the demerits. 56
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- The chart below shows the total number of minutes ( in billions of telephone) calls in the Uk,divide into three categories from 1995-2002 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01304347826 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86113863008 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613043478261 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6884210688 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8235294118 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5294117647 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0827186175608 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266661436821 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453806166012 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440699220734 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539013357757 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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