Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal.some people,however,think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these veiws and give own opinion?
In the sophisticated era, today, all professional are equal values in the communication. Some dwellers beleive that economic progress is their essential goal. But i think all professionl are equal in the citizens. There are plethora reasons behind it. I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
Modern world of world technology of information. There are umpteen most indenpensable goal in their soceity. For instance, docter, police businessman, teacher, engineer,fashion design and actor etc. Moreover, I think all modules are same important in their life. Therefore, dwellers are equal support all the proffessional because all module are very diligent
work in their life.
Nevertheless, some government believe that economic progress is their most important goal.Therefore, in my opinoin, all professional play a vital role in their life. As well as, nowadays, toddlers are interest to film line and they are very active in the act. Last but not the least, all profession line are important in the country because adolescent are very sharp.Then, they are choose the best career line in their life and they will be enjoy best future in their life.
In summarise, after analyzing that issue reckon, in my point of view, i think career goal depart all human being right because he/ she are know him/ her self.Then, any dwellers have different personilty in the life and they have fully right to choose career in their life because it will be depart all the furture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18257261411 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89388076686 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539419087137 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 74.8072352716 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2142857143 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19953806794 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806354235575 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766637424064 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114499671067 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052185592422 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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