The rendered pie charts compare the proportions of three water operations in six regions across the globe.
The analysis of charts reveals water is being used in highest quantity for agricultural tasks with central asia being the topmost user comprising nine-tenth of total. Subsequently Africa ,South east asia and south america utilize 84% ,81%and 71% for the same purpose respectively. However Industries exercised only 5% to 12% water in these regions.
Contrastingly , half of total water is exploited industrially in Europe and North America and these also nearly employ almost one third part in farms . Strikingly domestic applications occupy one fifth in south america only while it is barely 7-15% in every region. Central asia and south east asia had lowest household water consumption of only7%.
Inferably it is clear that farming category has the maximum water inputs while those are least for households.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the highest'.
Suggestion: in the highest
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
...st user comprising nine-tenth of total. Subsequently Africa ,South east asia and south ameri...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nine-tenth of total. Subsequently Africa ,South east asia and south america utiliz...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... east asia and south america utilize 84% ,81%and 71% for the same purpose respecti...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... 71% for the same purpose respectively. However Industries exercised only 5% to 12% wat...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...% water in these regions. Contrastingly , half of total water is exploited indust...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ly employ almost one third part in farms . Strikingly domestic applications occupy...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
...egion. Central asia and south east asia had lowest household water consumption of only7%. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38888888889 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71353923453 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701388888889 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3850292085 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129908781024 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561724698514 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413872133184 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866518914481 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422354655803 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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