The pie charts display a comparison of water consumptions in domestic, industrial and agricultural sectors in 6 areas of the world. The data is calibrated in percentage. Overall, agricultural and industrial use make up the majority of water consumption, while the least amount of water is used for domestic purpose.
In detail, noticeable similarities can be seen in the 2 regions of North America and Europe. The largest proportion of water, at roughly half of the total water consumption, is used for manufacturing purposes. Agricultural use takes up 39% in North America and 32% of water consumption in Europe, making it the second most common use of water in these regions. Similarly, these areas have almost identical domestic figures for water consumption, accounting for 13% in North America and 15% in Europe.
On the other hand, the most prevalent use of water in Central Asia, Africa, South East Asia, and South America is for the purpose of agriculture, at 88%, 84%, 81%, and 71% respectively. Compared to North America and Europe, these areas use noticeably less water for industrial and domestic purpose, accounting for only around 10%. While more water is required for manufacturing in South East Asia compared to household use, the opposite of this can be observed in Africa, Central Asia, and South America.
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs believing that this will make their staff healthier abd thus more effective at work Other employers see no benefit in doing so Consider the arguments from both aspects o 77
- Task1 - 2: The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011. 78
- It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantage and disadvantages of this? 73
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, similarly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95088684909 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0644480806 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.6 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222555218316 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103544599128 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660674492814 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173965273751 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485873902648 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.