The given pie charts represent the proportion of three nutritions in Average, Healthy and Healthy diet for sport. It is clear from the provided data that carbohydrates have the highest percentage although all types of diet, while fat expresses the minimal portion in all of them.
As far as carbohydrates are concerned, Average diet, Healthy diet and Healthy diet for sport have similar percentage of 40 per cent, fifty per cent and sixty per cent respectively.
According to the figures Average diet has the highest portion of protein, 40 per cent, while Healthy diet for sport consumed only twenty-five per cent of protein.
It is apparently seen that fat is not important in all types of diet and showing low numbers when Average and Healthy diet have twenty per cent and Healthy diet for sport only 15 per cent respectively.
- The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Some people say International sports events help in world peace. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Many animal species are becoming extinct as a result of human activities.what are the causes and possible solutions to this problem? 56
- Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic big cities. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 33.7804878049 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98571428571 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66002148219 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 70.0 106.607317073 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.0888294711 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181088079352 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120989244154 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289946261288 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131308977155 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424219117371 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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