The given information in pie chart shows us 5 types of approach for the news in Canada and Australia.
In this new modern era the usage of tv news is much higher in Canada. It represents 40% of people watch news on tv. As well as 7% of people use radio to listen the news. Likewise, 14% people love the old style by reading the news on newspapers\magazines. Nevertheless, the internet platform is on 2nd place as only 36% of people watch news on it. Remaining, 3% has not specified the way of getting news.
Moving towards, the Australia you can see 37% of people in that country use tv to watch the news. While only 2% use radio to get news. Yet, 7% of people use print media in Australia however, the leading way of Online is at 52% because they love to watch news on internet. Only 2% has not given there information on how they get news in this world of News lovers.
To cap it all, Australia is more ahead to get to knew news in this span.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... that country use tv to watch the news. While only 2% use radio to get news. Yet, 7% ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, nevertheless, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25274725275 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55529360732 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8933077177 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.5 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195641172908 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878438625668 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584045376336 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148142788072 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676606972998 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.2329268293 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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