The pie charts provide information on how money was spent by an American average household in 1970 and in 2004.
The diagrams provide information on how money was spent by an American average household in 1970 and in 2004.
Overall, all the expenditures split into six categories, including food, transport, entertainment, mortgage, clothing and childcare, though they are not evenly distributed. The mortgage was a significant part of families’ budget, though the share nearly doubled recently. By contrast, the Americans cut their expenses in almost each of the rest categories, excluding childcare and entertainment.
Specifically, clothing, food and mortgage were the outliers in 1970 with 22, 25 and 26 percent, respectively, followed by transport and entertainment (both at 13%). The least sum of money was dedicated to childcare (only 1%).
Whereas in 2004 half of the budget was spent on the mortgage, only 50% could be shared among other needs. The same pattern was followed in changing figures of costs on clothing and food, which halved, along with the transports’ share. Considering childcare, people started to spend significantly more, 1% in 1970 compared to 10% in 2004. Meanwhile, the most stable category was entertainment, which was never less or more than 13%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45054945055 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13743480604 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67032967033 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6360553799 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310287688283 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135127766869 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.225744243973 0.0843802449381 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269694516539 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.310593650779 0.0819641961636 379% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.