The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
The pie charts represent the six reasons (formal study, accompany, looking for work, definite job, no reason started and other reasons) for people to come in and left the UK in the year of 2007.
Overall there are six different reasons for immigrating and emigrating but the major factor influences on their immigration and emigration was employment.
The largest portion was dedicated to definite job of 30% of people immigrated to the UK and 29% of them emigrated from the UK. A large number of people, 22%, also emigrated because they were looking for a job, whereas people (of 12%) who entered into the UK had the same reason.
The reasons for accompanying had 15% immigration while 11% immigrants for other reasons whereas 13% for emigrants had accompanying reasons and 11% emigrants had other reasons.
In contrast, formal study reasons had higher immigrants’ rates than that of emigrants; 26% and 4% respectively and the exact opposite was shown for no reasons of 6% and 18% respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
... and 29% of them emigrated from the UK. A large number of people, 22%, also emigrated because the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.295918367347 0.268076937826 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.147959183673 0.116061578633 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0714285714286 0.0759168565197 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.015306122449 0.0366838410393 42% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.015306122449 0.0131127313244 117% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127551020408 0.155750635184 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0510204081633 0.0379272487307 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86960156666 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.015306122449 0.0210936926555 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0816326530612 0.0948980150116 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00510204081633 0.00967000014798 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 996.0 1161.00487805 86% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.9 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355421686747 0.337110787985 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289156626506 0.247514529752 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168674698795 0.171178102325 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144578313253 0.112407865282 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86960156666 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.546246751206 107% => OK
Word variations: 51.1520787183 49.3433353143 104% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 27.6666666667 23.0094962315 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.8100118998 42.9750493124 55% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.0 135.714022679 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 23.0094962315 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.689975730869 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 56.5823293173 47.7609492067 118% => OK
Elegance: 2.65714285714 2.94281807926 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506348055758 0.418131533498 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.195716585984 0.181151798455 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0876052766064 0.0850326197045 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.93663259673 0.706616315825 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0898703744393 0.157042692854 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.288572992623 0.228904883108 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139842576206 0.108899403657 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.183303230486 0.367819155151 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.085935353927 0.0812612215331 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303825785074 0.316326947829 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143433689726 0.0921553760075 156% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.