The pie charts illustrate the proportion of immigration and emigration details in the UK in 2007.
Overall, the huge percent of migration is cost by definite job. In contrast, few people migrate without reasons.
As immigration, there are just under one third of immigrants who move into UK for definite job, and 12 percents of immigrants aim at looking for work. Besides, Approximately a quarter of people came for formal study. Accompany/join make up 15 percents. Furthermore, 11 percents of people immigrate with other reasons, and 6 percent of people refuse to describe their reasons.
In comparison, most of emigrants go abroad regarding work position which account for 29 percents for those who have already got a job and other 22 percents for those who seek for job opportunities respectively. Moreover, only a minority of students choose to study in other countries, which just comprise 4 percent. Similarly, 13 percents of emigrants move out regarding accompany/join. Meanwhile, 18 percents of people prefer not to explain their reasons in terms of emigration ,and 14 percents of people hold other views on emigration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the emigrants') or simply say ''most emigrants''.
Suggestion: most of the emigrants; most emigrants
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, look, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, third, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30386740331 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09927516484 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651933701657 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4652732248 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2727272727 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157136665012 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641813084523 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754842339392 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128978120192 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081454380882 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.