Human dependency is the old pattern of human life. There are some individuals deem that we are more mutually relying on one another ,whereas some masses believe that we are self-reliant in this contemporary world. This essay delineate both opinions and my perspective in the subsequent paragraphs.
Some people ponder that people are leaning on each other because in every stage of life, individuals rely on others for various purpose such as in childhood days upbringing of children reliant on their parents, for education pupils need children and at workplace employees and employers depends on one another. Besides this, in the old age people rely on their children for care. Therefore, without dependency people cannot survive in the society.
Nevertheless, an array of people reckons that nowadays people are become individualistic as they can choose any education or career field independently. Moreover, people can learn from internet without any help of teacher for example distant education as well as their life style, can make decisions regarding own marriage, religion, tradition, customs etcetera as compared to past. So masses are becomes liberated.
As far as my perspective is concerned, I agree with former statement due to reason that people are more leaning on one another for the holistic development. For instance, people depend on government for employment, better public fascilities, transport system and without public support, government cannot do anything. Ultimately, people are rely on each other in every field of life.
To contemperate all the points it can be said that in this materialistic would people reliant on one another ', however directly or indirectly. A single person cannot live life without any support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43956043956 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90307534331 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.0720992593 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.071428571 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240126618793 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826924255597 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521732526197 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126656804391 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511060967732 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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