Some people think that in the modern world we have become more dependent on each other, while others think that people are now more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about how dependent they are on each other in modern life. While some people argue that this dependency is on the increase, I believe that people are much more monotonous, conscientious and independent.
There are a variety of reasons why I would argue that people are less independent in today's life. Firstly, due to the hustle and bustle of life almost all people are always on the go and have no time for making new friendships and communications. Secondly, the increased number of committed crimes in the society is thought provoking and consequently less people are reliable and truth worthy, so fellows are not interested in making friendship with unknown individuals and this will lead to isolation. Finally, immigration had a significant role in individuals' independency since they have to make their new life in host country without any aid and support from their beloved ones.
On the other hand, some people assert that dependency among people has increased in recent years. Nowadays, most of the women go back to the work environment after giving birth to a child, so children's upbringing is too dependent on grandparents' assist. As a result, individuals experience every day visits which bring intimacy and stronger relationships. Besides, technology benefits people in different ways, especially those who live far away from their home countries. They can keep in touch with friends and family members all over the world and these cause deeper relations.
In conclusion, nowadays individuals experience a more hectic, thriving life which makes them more isolated and build autonomy in their personality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31558935361 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89284903131 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631178707224 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3623528441 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258945509455 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996024440119 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10341431019 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178131639666 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135293026178 0.056905535591 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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