As technology has been outpacing, it has changed our lifestyle and dependency too. Therefore, few people ponder that nowadays we are more mutually dependent on others. However, the rest of them believe that we people are more self-dependent. As per my opinion, our life is more easy these days more self-sufficient. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and highlight the points why what are the key factors, which has made our life extra self-supporting.
Firstly, There are group of people who trust that as the world has been changing we are becoming additionally dependent on others. For an instance, Mobile phones have become an essential part of life, and due to this, we are always connected with our friends and family members so that people are able make phone calls any time to their loved ones whenever they need any sort of help.
But on the other side, there are other scenarios which make people less dependent on other, like using mobile phone people can track the map using navigation mobile apps which should live data. So, ultimately we are making our self-extra self sustainable.
Secondly, As the world has changed enormously, our life style is also changing, now students are more independent financially, as number of part time jobs are easily available in the market. For an example, Most of the western countries once crossed the age of 18 years and if they want to live with their parents they have pay rent and other expences to their parents. Which is a clear sign of self-sustainability. Thus, In today's world, people are highly independent compared to the past.
To conclude, As I have discussed both the ways that in few areas we have become extra dependent to share are feeling and issues with other, but there are other areas where we do not required someone to come and help us.
Still, there is a long way to become fully independent in all acpect of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
... self-supporting. Firstly, There are group of people who trust that as the world h...
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Line 6, column 141, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e independent financially, as number of part time jobs are easily available in the market...
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Line 6, column 371, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt and other expences to their parents. Which is a clear sign of self-sustainability....
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly independent in all acpect of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81458966565 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68456001317 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565349544073 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1261257211 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313645470521 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101693566381 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683658038476 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150113048787 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654310438234 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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