Owing to the technological innovations that aid in solving the crime quickly, in the recent days people are witnessing a drastic reduction in the incidence of crime compared to the past .In my opinion I agree with this view as technology helps in saving time by enabling the sharing of information about offenders and by helping to monitor crimes that are about to happen.
There is no scepticism about the fact the recent advancements in the field of computer technology aids in the sharing of information at a rapid pace. What I mean is that digitalisation of the criminal records and other important data about crimes across the globe has enabled state authorities to track the offenders and maintain the law and order. To illustrate this, Interpol is an international organisation that maintains digital data about international drug cartel and mafia leaders which enables every state to trace such criminals without difficulty and thereby take action with sufficient evidence.
Furthermore, technology certainly helps to prevent crimes that are about to happen. To be more precise, if people are aware of being monitored, not only will they obey the rules but also refuse to get involved in such crimes. A good example of this is that the installation of speed cameras with continuous monitoring facilities has curtailed the traffic crimes dramatically across major cities in India.
Lastly, technology helps to control crime by raising awareness among the public. In other words ,police personnel use mass media and the internet not only as an effective medium to communicate but also to raise awareness about cybercriminals and their style of doing fraudulent activities. A clear example of this is the effective awareness campaign about online hackers which resulted in a drop in complaints related to stealing of personal banking information.
To sum up in my opinion I strongly contend that technical inventions definitely have a supplementary role in curbing crime by raising awareness and monitoring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, so, i mean, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28260869565 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9764014688 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574534161491 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7095673615 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.636363636 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2727272727 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203868605935 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784344372019 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725496343229 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111319863466 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659694394841 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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