The various reasons for migration from and to the UK are shown by the pie chart.
Overall, it is clear from the chart that nearly a third of migrants came to the UK in search of a definite job. Additionally, slightly below the fraction of people immigrated to the UK emigrated from the UK to find a definite job, in 2007.
The majority of people who immigrated to the UK were looking for a definite job. Furthermore, many students also entered the UK for their studies as equal to just above a quarter. There were also a significant fraction of people migrated for accompany.
The most noticeable thing from the emigration data is that the majority of residents of the UK left it to find a definite job. While just under a quarter of people migrated to other countries to get a job. Finally, there was no reason stated by lots of people for emigration.
- Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve. 57
- The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. 67
- To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards. 58
- The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the UK left it to find a definite job. While just under a quarter of people migrated...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple migrated to other countries to get a job. Finally, there was no reason stated...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61290322581 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66241422993 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4533660198 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.4444444444 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365505027126 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171963528951 0.103423049105 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151841166039 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285609831336 0.15604864568 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176661031393 0.0819641961636 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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