Pie charts shows water used in 6 different areas of world for different purposes.
Summarise and highlight main points.
The pie chart given below illustrates the proportion of water used for different purposes in six different parts of the world
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Overall water is mainly used for Agricultural used followed by industrial purposes and lastly household purposes.
Agriculture was by far the leading use of water in African and the Asian subcontinent, However in the American and European subcontinent the major use of water was for industrial purposes. The only exception to this was the area of South America where still farming is the main occupation, due to which agricultural use of water is the primary use. More than 70% of water in the South America was used for Agriculture, which was still less compared to the African and Asian subcontinent where Agriculture use around 80% of the use. Highest being central Asia and the lowest being Europe.
Besides agriculture, Industrial use of water was the topic of importance.
In Industrialized countries like Europe and North America industrial use of water exceeds agricultural use, as farming is decreasing in these areas due to emergence of industrialization. About 53% of water in Europe was used by industries, followed by North America with 48% and South America with 19%.Remaining parts of Asia and Africa used less than 10% on Industries, exception being south east asia where 12% of water was used for factory purposes.
Domestic and Household use of water forms the third largest use of water. The least water used on domestic purposes was in asian subcontinent with 7%, followed by Africa with 9% due to lack of water sources. However,scenes were quite the opposite on the other side of the world where around 15% of water was used on household process. The highest domestic water usage was in South America where around 19% of people used water for regular domestic purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, lastly, so, still, third, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 965.302439024 160% => OK
No of words: 301.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12624584718 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87312864445 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.405315614618 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 283.868780488 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5164030348 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311954603545 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151196863685 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941776615009 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214991897335 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101253579369 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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