The pie charts demonstrate the comparison of energy production in France between 1995 and 2005. Energy produced by gas, coal, petro, nuclear and other.
In 1995, gas, coal and petro comprised of most energy production, with percentage of 29.63%, 29.80% and 29.27% respectively. Nuclear constituted a small percentage, which is 6.4%. Other source of energy composed 4.9% of energy production. Thus, gas, coal and petro took up big section, whilst nuclear and other source have small section.
In 2005, coal contribute 30.93% of energy production, which is the largest percentage. Followed by gas, the percentage is 30.31%. Petro made up 19.55% of energy production. Nuclear and other source share nearly the same percentage, which is 10.10% and 9.10 percentage respectively.
In comparison between 1995 and 2005, the percentage of coal and gas did not change much. The percentage of petro has decreased from 29.27% to 19.55% from 1995 to 2005. Nuclear and other source increased in ten years. Nuclear increased 3.7% and other source increased 4.2%.
- Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work.How do you think children should spend their free time ? 56
- Some people think that women should be able to do whatever job they are qualified for including police work while others think that it is wrong to allow women to become police officers What is your opinion 75
- Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since digital technology is now replacing their function To what extent do you agree or disagree 48
- Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important. Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 67
- Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with 82
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Suggestion: comparison,
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.320574162679 0.268076937826 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.1004784689 0.116061578633 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0717703349282 0.0759168565197 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0239234449761 0.0366838410393 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.1004784689 0.155750635184 65% => OK
Participles: 0.0239234449761 0.0379272487307 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7071259652 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00956937799043 0.0210936926555 45% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00956937799043 0.00175180941692 546% => OK
Determiners: 0.0382775119617 0.0948980150116 40% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0143540669856 0.00967000014798 148% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1057.0 1161.00487805 91% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.9 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.36746987952 5.90752243213 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409638554217 0.337110787985 122% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246987951807 0.247514529752 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180722891566 0.171178102325 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150602409639 0.112407865282 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7071259652 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487951807229 0.546246751206 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.9195851994 49.3433353143 79% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 8.93414634146 157% => OK
Sentence length: 11.8571428571 23.0094962315 52% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4850896784 42.9750493124 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 135.714022679 56% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8571428571 23.0094962315 52% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.214285714286 0.689975730869 31% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 36.5559380379 47.7609492067 77% => OK
Elegance: 3.57692307692 2.94281807926 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294993720399 0.418131533498 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133854238722 0.181151798455 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.173218393254 0.0850326197045 204% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531601973442 0.706616315825 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132623597662 0.157042692854 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139682224702 0.228904883108 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140586034885 0.108899403657 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.379452402978 0.367819155151 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0381616690577 0.0812612215331 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235491733904 0.316326947829 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838520447423 0.0921553760075 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70731707317 243% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 3.16585365854 253% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.