The supplied two pie charts compare 5 energy resources which consumed by French between 1995 and 2005.
Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of Coal, Gas, Nuclear and Other energy productions changed less significantly but, figure was upward. The percentage of Petrol, in contrast, decreased significantly at the end of the decade.
With regards energy consumption by Coal, it was the largest proportion with 29.80% in 1995 and then increased by 1,13% reached at 30,93% in 2005.
Moreover Gas energy consumption comprised of 29.63% and followed not remarkable increase to 30.31% at the end.
By contrast, the proportion of Petrol which was the third largest consumption of energy in both time periods , it declined significantly from 29.27% to 19.55%.
As regards to Nuclear and Other energy productions, there were a slight rise by 3.70% and by 4 % respectively.
Generally,Coal, Gas and Petrol shared substantial fragment in both pie charts ,whereas, Nuclear and Other energy productions were the lowest.
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...ompare 5 energy resources which consumed by French between 1995 and 2005. Overal...
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...ut, figure was upward. The percentage of Petrol, in contrast, decreased significa...
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...n with 29.80% in 1995 and then increased by 1,13% reached at 30,93% in 2005. Mor...
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...uclear and Other energy productions were the lowest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, third, whereas, as regards, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01846171271 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3075991204 43.030603864 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.5 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 1.69756097561 1591% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10734405227 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520322327361 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370946295541 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.057597346338 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337190511571 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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