The plan below show the layout of a university's sport center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are two maps concerning the alocation of the elements and features of a sport complex in a university. The first plan illustrates the present layout while the second one shows the complex after reconstruction. Overall, many new features will be added to the sport center such as a cafe and a sports shop and all the elements of the center will be altered in some way exept for the 25m pool.
The current plan is consist of three separate areas. one big in the middle with rectangular shape and two simillar ones in the same forms on the east and west side of it. The center on has a entrance in the south side which leads to a reception, and a 25m pool in the center with seating, gym and changing room surrounding it. Two outdoor courts are located on the west and east of sport center outside it.
In the future all the areas will be attached together and a large area consisted of all the elements will be formed. The outdoor courts will be eliminated and a leisurepool with changing room and a sport hall with its changing room will be constructed on the west and east of the sport center. The old gym will be extended to east to make it bigger and two dance studios will be built on the east of sports hall. On the east side of reception a cafe and on its west side a sports shop will be opened.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
... the 25m pool. The current plan is consist of three separate areas. one big in the...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...lan is consist of three separate areas. one big in the middle with rectangular shap...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... and west side of it. The center on has a entrance in the south side which leads ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32258064516 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36401424392 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.439516129032 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7341724249 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4545454545 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154271503375 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068733568562 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388230895496 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114279931444 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412267399574 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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