The plans below show a harbor in 2000 and how it looks today.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates a considerable change in the harbor between the 2000 plan and the current plan.
It is obvious that the majority of the harbor consists of land located southern section of the map. In addition, there are numerous changes in the building of the west in the current plan.
As can be seen, there are some cases without any change such as car parks that are located under showers and toilets in both maps, lifeboats, the access road to lifeboat, and public and private beach. Not only does the castle is changed of use to a hotel but also, fishing boats and marina replaced with each other. However, a cafés and shops building are constructed near to lifeboat at the left corner a pathway to access the hotel, and showers and toilets above a bigger car park and a dock next to the previous version. The bigger car park changes the entre to the main road.
In conclusion, the new porth harbour has more facilities and accessible roads which seem better than its previous version in 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a café' or simply 'cafés'?
Suggestion: a café; cafés
...rina replaced with each other. However, a cafés and shops building are constructed near...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62569832402 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32214148213 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.342421227 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0760197933112 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416017697502 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509741989492 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067985792829 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059338258264 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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